My Art Class Pictures

Well these are the two pictures I have made so far in my Art Class. I'm sort of proud of them, any suggestions for improvements are welcome :)

The first one is the one that got graded, and the second one is the one I drew for no good reason, except boredom.

Trapped

Just something I wrote on the way to the supermarket with my dad on Saturday afternoon. Depicts my then mood perfectly I think. Grammar may not be great, but hey I try!

Here goes:

Sorrow in my eyes
I walk a lonely loser
The minutes pass by
Yet I'm stuck right here
The lights dim around me
But how do I tell anyone
That I'm the silence
Which never came out the darkness